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Vampire State of Mind

October 22, 2010
By KelseyLovesYou BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
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KelseyLovesYou BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
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Change happens, face it. Love happens, make it. Risks happen, take it. Life happens, chase it. :)

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I don't like what I've become.
It's taking over me.
It drags me deep into the dark.
So black that I can't see.

People think I'm normal.
But what I am is wrong.
What I am is evil.
Because of that, I don't belong.

The monster inside me is angry.
For I don't give it what it needs.
It thrashes and rages in my depths,
Longing me to feed.

If only I could silence it,
Make the monster go away.
Banish it to the deep abyss.
The price no one would pay.

I don't like what I've become.
It's taking over me.
When I happen to lose control,
I forget all humanity.

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

The author's comments:
My friends and I were OBSESSED with The Twilight Saga, so the books and movies really inspired me to write this. :)
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Di on the beach said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:17 am
For someone who isn't a "vampire" you seem to have captured the depth and feelings you would have if you were one. That's what a great writer can do! You're on your way girl, keep polishing it by writing more as often as possible. We will see your name in a published book one day, I just know it!!
mdb7 said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 3:01 pm
This is an excellent work!  Great job!  Could apply to a lot more than just being a vampire... which means you were outstandingly successful with abiguity, a staple in modern art.
Kailyn01 said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 8:45 pm
Look at u!!!Your work is awesome and I couldn't be more proud of my little girl!!!