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Losing it

October 20, 2010
By Swindlewick SILVER, ..., Washington
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Swindlewick SILVER, ..., Washington
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"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." ~Voltaire

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I leave the white world
In a delicate horse-drawn carriage
And arrive in this world
In a beaten down pick-up

© Steve F., Marblehead, MA

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fatesknocking GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 1:46 pm
fatesknocking GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Prayers go up and blessings come down.

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when i first saw this i didnt believe it was a poem because of how short it was. but i absolutely love this, and although its short, it gives a stronger message that way.