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December 16, 2010
By HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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I’m ready to make a difference.
I want to step out of my comfort zone and create a huge wave of impact.
I want to see the world through the eyes of myself, not through some silly little picture.
I want to believe I will be successful.
I want to live with several passions.
I want to create something no one has ever seen before.
I want to inspire and be inspired.
I’m ready to get out of Easley, South Carolina and begin the journey of a lifetime.
I’m ready for it all.
I will succeed.
I will believe.
I will dream big, and I will be the hopeful.

© Charlotte M., Naples, FL

The author's comments:
Everything in this poem is completely 100% true! While writng this particular piece of work, I began asking myself "What do I want to do with my life?" and answered them honestly in this poem. I hope it speaks to people and I hope it will relate to how teenagers feel.
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This article has 42 comments.

HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:24 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thanks, and I'm glad you could relate!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:23 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:22 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you and I will check that out!
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 3:17 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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THis poem is 100% true for me as well. Except for the bit about Easley, S.C. lol
Vicky11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 11:37 am
Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
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The wisest men follow their own direction - Euripides

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Totally relatable! We all dream, and dream big, and I don't think we should let go of those dreams :) Well done
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 7:35 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i for one defientaly (don't know how to spell that!) relate! i think its great, basically what most teenagers feel! my piece called Bigger Than This is very like this piece :)
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 6:01 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you!
NinjaGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 2:44 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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I like the concept and the things you want to do with your life :) Could maybe use some more descriptive words. The lines could probably flow better if they were shorter, but I still like it!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 6:42 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

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In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you! I live in a small town too and I can't wait to see the rest of the world!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 6:40 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

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In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you so much!
hopelovepain said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 1:40 pm
hopelovepain, Maplewood, New Jersey
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I like the transition from "I want" to "I'm ready" to "I will." Beautiful work! Good luck - keep writing! (: 
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 10:29 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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You definitely accomplished what you set out to with this poem - many people can relate to this, myself included. I can't wait to get out of my small town and live my life to the fullest! My favorite lines are the second and third! :)
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 5:36 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

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In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you so much and I'm glad you feel the same way!
puzzlesleftincomplete BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 4:29 pm
puzzlesleftincomplete BRONZE, Oradell, New Jersey
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I just want to say that I feel the same way right now. I want to get out and figure things out... This poem is really great, so keep up the great work!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:35 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you. That really means a lot!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:34 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:34 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thanks a lot!
Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 10:48 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
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L.O.V.E.D it ! :D

God, you're good :O

I like the easiness, the direct and strong tone . Like, I can just picture this girl with her head held high, chin up . So determined :')

Dark_Mind GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 9:56 am
Dark_Mind GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
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It really was very inspiring, Great Message.!
Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 8:54 am
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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Awesome! Inspiring! Encouraging!