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when i lost you

February 10, 2011
By EricaCadesha GOLD, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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smashing head 1st
into a cloud of despair
dropping a single tear
one must not dare
if she See's fear in your eye's
with a blink
your done
and with a snap of a finger
I'm left all alone
stuck and left wondering
with the time going on
I'm still lost within the thought
and my head is still pondering

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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i lost some one Important and I'm dealing with it
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