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Falling In Love

March 6, 2011
By whoaitscheyenne BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
whoaitscheyenne BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“Freud suggests that in order to love someone else, one must love themselves; it’s a classic “needs before other needs” argument. Unfortunately, no one really loves themselves . And, if they do, they need to get to know themselves better. Unfortunately, no one is really happy.” -Pete Wentz


Falling in love is like losing your memory
You can't remember anything, or where you are
All you know is, there's someone looking at you
And in a sea of people-

they're all that you see too

Falling in love is like a flood
The water rises and rises,
Until you're in over your head
You just stop holding your breath and just sink


letting the water embrace you

Falling in love is like being oblivious
You aren't aware of anything

Absolutely nothing, around you.
You just know one single thing,
There's somebody that loves you
And, more than anything,

you love them too.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this poem because I wanted to express the way I felt about the guy I'm in love with.

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on Apr. 19 2011 at 8:21 pm
whoaitscheyenne BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“Freud suggests that in order to love someone else, one must love themselves; it’s a classic “needs before other needs” argument. Unfortunately, no one really loves themselves . And, if they do, they need to get to know themselves better. Unfortunately, no one is really happy.” -Pete Wentz

Thank you so much! :D

on Apr. 8 2011 at 7:22 am
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

i like your comparisons to love they were really pretty