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Feel The Rush

March 14, 2011
By PrettyGirlMia BRONZE, Kennesaw, Georgia
PrettyGirlMia BRONZE, Kennesaw, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
A man falls in love through his eyes, a woman through her ears.


The rush from the first kiss
The rush from oxygen that came from
your lips
The rush of air, giving me goosebumps
The rush of blood flowing through me
The rush of many first to come
The rush of me
The rush of you
The rush that came from our emotions
Turn into
Lust
The rush of Lust .

The author's comments:
i read this poem called the fear of, and my creative writing teacher told me to play around with it and this is what came to me.

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mommy7 said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:39 pm
Awww how original!