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I Want to Say MAG

April 13, 2011
By feconnolly BRONZE, Attleboro, Massachusetts
feconnolly BRONZE, Attleboro, Massachusetts
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He was unspectacular, dressed solely
in beige
I almost missed him, walked right by
Thankful that he calls my name,
we turn, eyes catch
those amber sunset gems.

Guilt, apologies and lies
reflect me like mirrors
Sour milk taste, metallic scent
The sickly sweet of his aftershave
I can detect the hate
underneath.

His golden globes sparkle with
alert, mine droop.
I'm exhausted already.
We are drowsy, we are hollow.
Never the same as it once was.
Impossible. Unlikely. Withdrawn.
Never destined. Never right.
Never again.



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on Jun. 24 2012 at 2:37 pm
feconnolly BRONZE, Attleboro, Massachusetts
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Thank you, I appreciate the positive feedback.

on Dec. 31 2011 at 2:48 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Wow, its well written but it is kind of sad. I like it though.