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Oh and with Great Care MAG

May 23, 2011
By ThereAreManyTruths BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
ThereAreManyTruths BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, thte world will know peace. <br /> --Jimi Hendrix


I twist everything with a
certain care into a giant knot
of problems and people and parents and stress (and life).
I tie it with a ribbon of quote have a great day
and do good in school and
nice to see you and do as I do and
do as I say and what if you're really
going to hell?
and this Sunday you have to go to church
unquote and Help me I'm drowning!
I'm not breaking anything and of course
I'm fine
(I don't need your help, why can't they ever
say oh of course you're right)

I know you think I'm not your equal.



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on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:00 pm
ThereAreManyTruths BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, thte world will know peace. <br /> --Jimi Hendrix

Thanks! I do a have a strange style, I appreciate that you get it! 

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 8:44 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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u have a unique way of expression n i absolutely love this poem! :D great job.