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Pain In Love

June 4, 2011
By Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Keep the will to live for the future is unpredictable -by me

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love is not meant to played with.
cant you see you can hurt me just by talking about this other girl,
when you show me that you like me then the next you dont.
you are confusing me
stop please this pain is unbearable
if you really like me then stop playing with me
it pains me to see that im falling hard for you
when you cant even see that!!
Pain in love is unbearable
please dont make me pain again like last time
make this pain go away. i cant do it alone.
thats what makes me angry,
becuase its like you are the only cure for this pain to go away.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

The author's comments:
This was inspired by pain, and to dedicate to my friend and I in hardship in love
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FallenAngel1 SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 7:44 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
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&quot;Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow.&quot;-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare<br /> &quot;What&#039;s In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet.&quot;-Romeo

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SO much pain, it's soo good. It hurts to be in love with someone only to find out that they do not feel the same way. This is very good, it makes me want to cry. But it is a good cry. Keep it up!!! :-) :-)