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Angelic Smile

June 12, 2011
By faerest BRONZE, St Paul, Minnesota
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Broken and twisted
In a way
like never before
my heart is angry and black
Twisting the world
Rage colors my face
Revenge a one way track
There is no return
No escape
my mind is set
There is no turning back
my heart is bleeding
yearning for love
But filled with Black
I cant escape
its a cage
holding me back
I want to escape
But i cant
There is a light
In the distance
I see
your face smiling
so angelically
And my heart is saved
No longer broken
no longer twisted
I'm saved
By your smile

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

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I worte this because of someone i know who always brightens my day
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faerest BRONZE said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 2:39 pm
faerest BRONZE, St Paul, Minnesota
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this one took about a week... some of my other ones took a while :S
KatPantle SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 3:27 am
KatPantle SILVER, Burien, Washington
5 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;people dont change, the real them just comes out later in the relationship&quot; -Carlos A.<br /> &quot;You said you like me better on my knees,<br /> so I&#039;ll stick around.<br /> Just so you can see me trying on my feet&quot; -Carlos A.

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Hey how long did it take for this to get published? Or average for any of your work?
faerest BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 2:58 pm
faerest BRONZE, St Paul, Minnesota
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thanks :) it took a while for me to get the words just right
IamRevy BRONZE said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 9:47 am
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 Exquisite piece your words sound so deep and sincere a desirable quality in a writer/poet 
KatPantle SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:42 am
KatPantle SILVER, Burien, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;people dont change, the real them just comes out later in the relationship&quot; -Carlos A.<br /> &quot;You said you like me better on my knees,<br /> so I&#039;ll stick around.<br /> Just so you can see me trying on my feet&quot; -Carlos A.

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lovely. dark to light. relateable :)