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Pitifull Sight

June 16, 2011
By Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

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Can't think,


Can't talk,


Can't cry,


Can't walk.


Can't do a damn thing,

Without someone saying something.


Everything I do is wrong,

Can't seem to do anything right.


So why should I stay here?

When all they see,

when they look at me

is a pitifull sight.

© Katie K., Mesa, AZ

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Sarah1311 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 5:34 pm
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

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Thanks guys. :)

Savetheplanet: thanks, I try. :)

TaleGate GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 1:00 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

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My emotions definitely are heartbreaking these days . . .
TaleGate GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 2:23 am
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

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Yeah? Thank you savetheplanet. :3
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 9:46 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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I totally feel like that sometimes.  And although I don't know you personally like TaleGate, through your poems I can feel your emotions.  And they are heartbreaking.
TaleGate GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 8:10 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

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No hun. When I look at you, it's like the whole room lights up. You are a beautiful talented sight. Even without contacts and glasses. That'll never change for me. I know you have a great heart. But what a heartfelt poem. :)