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Trainwreck

June 30, 2011
By sterotypicalwhitegirl SILVER, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
sterotypicalwhitegirl SILVER, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
5 articles 6 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Karen: Do you wanna do something fun? Wanna go to taco bell? <br /> Regina: I can&#039;t go to taco bell, I&#039;m on an all-carb diet. GOD Karen you&#039;re so stupid! <br /> [Regina leaves, Gretchen follows] <br /> Gretchen: Wait, Regina! Talk to me! <br /> Regina: No one understan


Jarred from peaceful sleep by the screaming of brakes
The metal around me moans
I screech in fright
Through my closed eyes I see the flames
Flashback
I hear loud laughter
My little sisters voice
I see my friends faces
My first kiss
When I boarded this train I had no idea
No idea that it would destroy me
No idea that it would ruin lives
I don’t have to be the train wreck that I am
To pull my self out of the rubble all I have to do
Is Put Down the knife


The author's comments:
Im still new to poetry and would love feedback on this or any of my other work!

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on Jul. 10 2011 at 12:43 pm
G_R_A_C_I_E GOLD, Colonial Heights, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We are where we are, but we choose where we go.&quot; ~Anonymous

Metaphorical "train wreck", nice; but, the last line doesn't really fit with that metaphor. Try carrying one analogy the entire way through.