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Never To Awaken

July 1, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe


Can't breathe
I need a way out,
this dream is
crazy, insane, a living
nightmare
I can't escape
some one help
no one can hear
me screaming
with in the
darkness
I can't breathe
never to awaken
from this awful
nightmare of
darkness



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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 8:03 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like it, but I feel like the end could have been just slightly better. I get why it was what it was, but I don't know... it just doesn't sound completely right to me. It does draw the reader in, though, so kudos on that.

Check out my poems sometime?