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I am Juliet

July 6, 2011
By ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
50 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love<br /> Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance! <br /> If they give you ruled paper, write the other way


I sit here on the floor
My face tattooed with black
Sadness is a weight
Holding me down
A tragedy is my life

He was taken from me
Actually he pulled himself away
I want to tell him how I feel
But I am too afraid

Now I have lost my chance
It will never be the same again
With him around
I will always be distant

I have lost of a piece of me
I feel nothing inside
Deep pain I am oblivious to…

I thought we were supposed to be
Surely you felt the same
How long have you led this lie?
Prince Charming drove me to pain
I can’t believe it is true
I guess it is the right thing
I don’t want to hurt inside
I am lost without you
I can’t keep going
I don’t want to stay here
I want to go back to that place
Where I was naïve

When I thought you might love me
When I thought you were my prince
When I dreamed

You had to run away, my Romeo
I thought we were meant to be
A fairytale, forever and always
Happily ever after

I wanted to be Cinderella
But now, I am Juliet.



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on Sep. 5 2011 at 6:15 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
50 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love<br /> Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance! <br /> If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

Thank you:)

on Sep. 2 2011 at 12:47 pm
JenSweetheart BRONZE, Lawrence, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. - Eleanor Roosevelt

This is really good. I really like it. Use more punctuation though, when you're writing. 

on Jul. 31 2011 at 3:45 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
50 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love<br /> Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance! <br /> If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

thank you so much!

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on Jul. 30 2011 at 4:51 pm
Izaac96 GOLD, Jersey City, New Jersey
16 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Both Poverty and riches are offspring of thought&quot; -Napoleon Hill

My favorite....i absolutely loved it!