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August 2, 2011
By Lorilye GOLD, Clover, South Carolina
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They are beautiful,
2 flowers like the spring blossoms.
bright vibrant radiant lights,
sun and stars.
elegance and surpreame beauty,
in them there is perfection.
am i beautiful?
a thorn bush not a delicate flower,
my light pale and weak,
only reflecting thier beauty.
pretty… perhaps,
but i have none of this perfection.

© Melanie R., Milpitas, CA

The author's comments:
so this was a bad day i am exceedingly jealous of my two best friends. but also everyone has days where they aren't satisfied with themselves i am merely documenting those rare moments.
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