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Love entwined

August 12, 2011
By Jenga142 BRONZE, Stoke On Trent, Other
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Jenga142 BRONZE, Stoke On Trent, Other
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all animals are equal but some are more equal than others

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I see you,
Your face, your eyes and your smile.
Our hands intertwined.
You are mine.
I am yours.
Our world is the small space between our beating hearts.
Everything I need is you.
All my dreams are your words.
All your words are my dreams.
Love cannot describe this power I feel surge in my soul,
Whenever you speak a word.
I am nowhere if you are not there.

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ImSoCoolitHurts SILVER said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 8:55 am
ImSoCoolitHurts SILVER, Centerville, Iowa
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&quot;Quotes are for people who aren&rsquo;t creative enough to speak their own minds, and I&#039;m a hypocrite&quot;

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Very nice, I like the feel of it. Other than perhaps adding length I really have no advice for you, Keep writing :)
Jenga142 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 7:52 am
Jenga142 BRONZE, Stoke On Trent, Other
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
all animals are equal but some are more equal than others

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hey , i am the author of this poem and was wandering if anyone who has read this poem will please give me some honest feedback so I know what to take into acount when writing in the future...... Thankyou xxx