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The secret (rewrite)

August 8, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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I have a secret
It is quite evil and dark
No one will ever find out
About the
secret I hide
No one must know
Or I will have to
Run, hide, sneak
A way
I'm scared for my
Love ones, family, friends
The secret is taring me up
from the inside until
I'm nothing
It's like a dream
but only it's a
Nightmare
I'm screaming inside
No one can hear me
I have to keep
The secret
A live
The secret is
Evil, unloving, monstrous
I have a secret
It is quite dark and evil
No one can know

© Kennedy C., Rockdale, TX

The author's comments:
This is the rewrite of my other poem with the same name enjoy:)
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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2012 at 12:53 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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*hugs tightly* I hope and pray you recieve the best...