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August 25, 2011
By Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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&quot;If You Don&#039;t Fight Back, You&#039;ve Already Lost.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs.&quot;

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I believe cats and dogs go to heaven with no trial
I believe ducks cannot fly
I believe in young people listening to old people music
I believe in magical chocolate factories
I believe in dancing naked after showering
I believe the ceiling is more interesting than a book

I think staring out the window for hours is the best way to spend a day

© Marissa S., Westminster, CO

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RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2015 at 10:31 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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&quot;I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work.&quot; -Thomas Edison

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I think it deserves all five stars that I gave it! It is very unique, love the use of language and creative things ("the ceiling is more interesting than a book"), I do NOT, absolutely NOT believe this is incomplete. Some people like to use rhyming (which is why Zaylie wrote it`s incomplete, seriously, all of her poems are rhyming or structurally developed differently), but this is well done, with or without rhyme which is rare. All of my poems rhyme to some degree but none really have a firm or steady structure (which is what I`m working on), but yours do not need a different structure. Love the style, It`s purely amazing (which is why I put that), it`s awesome. Great job!
Zaylie PLATINUM said...
on May. 4 2013 at 6:20 pm
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
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I like the way it is done but it seems incomplete to me.