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September 29, 2011
By MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
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Curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back -myself

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Theres a strange feeling

hidden inside my heart

Theres a stored up

emotion in my soul



I crave for love

no matter how hard

I long eagerly for love

even though it hurts



I'll wait for you

though it takes so many nights

I'll save my last breath

untill the sun refuses to shine its light



I want you to know

I need you to know

that you're the one i can never let go

© Bryttany O., Shenandoah, PA

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Libra97 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 9:02 pm
Libra97 PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
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Thanks! It's much appreciated! :D
MugginsSachett GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 8:40 pm
MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

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yeah sure, will do :)
Libra97 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 8:51 am
Libra97 PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
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I re-read it and now that I see where you're going with this, I like it! The irregularity is nice and really fits the mood of the poem. Great job and keep it up! Would you be willing to check out some of my poetry? I use irregular rhythms too. :)
MugginsSachett GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 6:51 am
MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
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thank you. and i know that thanks, it wasnt supposed to have a perfect rhythem.
Libra97 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 6:51 am
Libra97 PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
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Loved the last line! It just sounded so right for that place. Just remember that poetry doesn't always have to rhyme! I feel that the rythm was a little off due to it.