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Etch-a-Sketch

October 18, 2011
By AudieB123 PLATINUM, Spring Grove, Minnesota
AudieB123 PLATINUM, Spring Grove, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."


Thud, bounce, boom, crash; go the
thoughts in my head.
They are energizer bunnies,
going on and on.
They are the ocean waves
thrashing rhythmically.
With all the activity, you'd
think there would be some variety.
Of course not- It's the same
idea wearing different disguises.
You smiling at me; your eyes.
Supposed to be thinking about
planes, angles, lines.
But the only line that matters is
one that connects me to you.
Too bad my brain isn't
an etch-a-sketch.


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emily<3you15 said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 10:50 pm

I love this poem so much and i am so glad that it got put on this site! it is so inspiring! good luck in the furture! and i would love to see more of your poems!

love you audie!

love- your best friend :)


emily<3you15 said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 10:43 pm
Oh audie it is a wonderful poem! i love it! <3!

linds29 said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 12:39 pm

audie! i love this poem! its amazing!

love you!

-lindseyr from cal:)