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Penning Chivalry MAG

March 13, 2008
By Sarah09 SILVER, Evanston, Illinois
Sarah09 SILVER, Evanston, Illinois
6 articles 2 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Glory is seeing the impossible, saying 'screw it,' and drawing your sword anyway." -Anonymous


Between school daze
and summer knights
I sit in my scholarly tower,
Penning chivalry
of the noblest sort.
The epitome of manhood,
Black ink spurs forth
his college-ruled steed,
toward the spiral-bound
damsel in distress.
She is held captive
by the tightest of margins,
her ransom clearly demanded
on the syllabus.
He fights incoherent thoughts,
empty passion,
and clichés of all shapes and sizes,
bravely rescuing said damsel
from the securely zipped back pack
of her own quivering mind.



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on Sep. 11 2011 at 8:56 pm
ChainedDreamer BRONZE, Coppell, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We must use time as a tool, not as a crutch.&quot; John F. Kennedy. <br /> &quot;Imagination rules the world.&quot; -Napolean Bonaparte

Fantastic. A beautiful extended metaphor, well written... 

on Sep. 11 2011 at 7:28 pm
Lakisha Gladden, Winnsboro, South Carolina
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This is a great poem and I am so glad that I read it. The title is waht attracted me and like the title, the poem is very attractive and descriptive. Very well written. Great job!!

on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:02 am
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It&#039;s one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn&#039;t happen like this,.....

hey nice work.....<3

on Jun. 15 2011 at 8:43 pm
TheLemonadeCrusade SILVER, Huntersville, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the whole world, and all there ever will be to know and understand&quot;

i so agree!

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on Jun. 7 2011 at 11:00 am
it's beautiful, it's inspiring, I love how you take the simplest of items and phrases and turn them into a fairy tale work of art.

on May. 27 2011 at 11:27 am
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;See, we don&#039;t really care who you are;<br /> Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.<br /> So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer&#039;s disease,<br /> And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Sanctuary&quot;- Paradise Fears

I love this! It's incredible! (:

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on May. 16 2011 at 4:04 pm
reblep GOLD, Chester, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
the sun through my window, warming my skin...

i absolutly love how this is one big metaphor, mainly the first two lines, it is so amazing. 

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 2 2011 at 6:32 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

I love the metaphor!!!

I love this poem!!


on May. 1 2011 at 4:49 pm
RainWashed PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
46 articles 1 photo 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Repeat the good and the bad. Do it all again. And pile on the years.&quot;

This was a great metaphor! I really enjoyed reading it, I found a smile spreading across my face as my eyes fluttered from side to side, while reading. This was wonderful! Great job!

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:56 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

GREAT METAPHOR!!! So different and interesting! I loved it :)

Check out some of my work if you'd like !


on Feb. 25 2011 at 5:05 pm
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
1 article 4 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life isn&#039;t about just waiting out the storm. It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.&quot;

Love it!!!! Great poem! :)

on Feb. 25 2011 at 3:10 pm
ConstanceN BRONZE, San Rafael, California
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This poem is amazing! Extremely well written and the extended metaphor works all the way through :)

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:58 am
SuperSenior BRONZE, Dublin, Other
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who are scared to die never truly live

This is beautiful a great work of poetry and art

on Feb. 3 2011 at 2:34 pm
BeatlesLove97 BRONZE, Normal, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t know half of you half as well as I should like, and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve- Bilbo Baggins: The Fellowship of the Ring

This is fantastic! If I could ask anyone in the world to teach me how to write amazing poetry it would be you :)

Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 11:23 am
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Independence is my happiness, I view things as they are without regard to place or person. My country is the world, and my religion is to do good. - Thomas Paine

Nice! I like how you consistently tie the knight back to things pertaining to writing, and the metaphor isn't lost along the way. Nicely done. If you have the time, check out mine? :)

on Jan. 12 2011 at 7:39 am
Shminkanator5000 SILVER, Rochester, New York
9 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the only thing we have to fear is fear itself&quot;

i loved this! SO well written and with very cool word play.

on Dec. 21 2010 at 8:45 pm
cantabile BRONZE, Boerne, Texas
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We walk by faith not by sight&quot; 2 Corrinthians 5:7<br /> Let it come to you

Loved it. I could picture the whole thing!

on Dec. 21 2010 at 5:46 pm
star-gazing-dreamer GOLD, Pittsgrove, New Jersey
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everywhere I have sought rest and not found it,<br /> except sitting in a corner by myself with a little book.<br /> ~ Thomas Kempis ~

I love your poem! " he fights  incoherent thought, empty passion, and cliches of all shapes and sizes"  is my favorite line. Well written.  :)

on Dec. 21 2010 at 8:31 am
Gracious PLATINUM, Go Away, Kansas
22 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;life sucks and then you die, yeah, i should be so lucky&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Jacob, Twilight<br /> <br /> I&rsquo;m still that girl who falls when she runs, Getting back up, because falling is fun.

I love how its school daze and summer knights instead of school days and summer nights. its really kicks off your poem :)

on Oct. 19 2010 at 8:50 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
45 articles 15 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t dream it. Be it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body.&quot;<br /> &quot;Paper is more patient than man.&quot;<br /> &quot;Where you live shouldn&#039;t determine whether you live&quot;

I luv it! Writing a poem about writing a story...very creative! :)