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Dreams Go

December 1, 2011
By Chellebelle714 SILVER, Corning, New York
Chellebelle714 SILVER, Corning, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You can sit there and tell me its going to be alright. But sometimes its not going to be alright.


Dreams Rise,
Like a mountain to the sky,
Dreams Grow,
Like a newly planted tree,
Dreams Crash,
Like waves on a beach,
Dreams Go,
Like a wind whistling though the trees



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on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:23 pm
brynnibooo BRONZE, Huntington, West Virginia
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This is pretty! I love poems that use personification! The imagery is very nice too! You should check out some of my poems! I would really appreciate some feedback! (Great Job on Editor's Choice too :D) -Keep Writing! 

Lizette SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:20 pm
Lizette SILVER, Delphos, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone is entitled to be stupid. But some people abuse the privlidge!

i loved the structure, the rythem, and how you kept it short and to the point! great job!

on Dec. 2 2011 at 4:26 pm
Compulsiveshoelace BRONZE, Frederick, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Whenever you find yourself on the side of the majority, it is time to pause and reflect. -Mark Twain

This is beautiful, in an abstract way.