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To Mend MAG

April 9, 2008
By Anonymous

How did we get caught in this mix.
Of people throwing away their lives for a fix.
Of homicide and suicide.
Of dropouts and bad routes.
Of polluted earth and girls giving birth.
Of STDs, stolen keys.
Of dark gray skies and countless drive-bys.
Of fallen hope and have to cope.
When will it finally end? When will the world
begin … to mend?



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on Feb. 26 2011 at 8:28 pm
Fullyalive15 SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams."~Dr.Suess

Very nice, your really got your point across without over-doing it. 

on Dec. 22 2010 at 11:09 am
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

I really liked this, nothing to say but keep it up !! :) 

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Nov. 21 2010 at 2:15 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

I really like it. I think that the picture you chose to put with it really brings out a very strong feeling of wanting all of the bad things to go away, and letting the magic reign again.

on Oct. 18 2010 at 10:04 am
Dessometrics BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
currently seeking

i love this its amazing

DiceBaby GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 12:51 am
DiceBaby GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Hell hath no fury like a woman's scorn

livin in the type of neighborhood i live in u have no idea how much this poem has just touched my heart. i truely wish everyone asked the same question

on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:36 pm
JustBeingME SILVER, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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This describes exactly how I feel about the world and how we need to change it... love love love it :)

on Jan. 12 2010 at 4:50 pm
Lollipop2012 SILVER, Las Veags, Nevada
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wow, this poem is really good!!

on Jun. 27 2009 at 5:20 am
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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That poem touched my heart ina million different ways.

italinbaby11 said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 11:32 pm
i luv it and i can relate to everything but mostly the pregnant thing it was just exilirating and its like when u listen to that poem it seems like it will never mend back

on Jun. 8 2009 at 10:54 pm
All i can say is WOW! This poem explained exactly what i was feeling. It really grabs the readers attention while asking why hasnt anyone offered a solution to the daily tragidies that occur everyday on this painfilled earth.

on Jun. 8 2009 at 10:39 pm
peacenow17 SILVER, Auburn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself and never let anyone tell you otherwise" Andy Sixx

This poem is amazing. You totally hit the nail on the head. Our world is in a really sucky place right now and we are the generation that can change it.

strain118 said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 10:32 pm
this is really a thought provoking poem. You obviously put a lot of feeling into this poem!

on Jun. 8 2009 at 8:02 pm
RainbowDark BRONZE, Brockton, Massachusetts
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This is amazing!!

on Jun. 8 2009 at 7:37 pm
yellow4ever BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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i love it! its amazingg

RiaRen SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 6:59 pm
RiaRen SILVER, New Bothwell, Other
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even though its not that long of a poem it points out all the big wrongs in our world. that question is one that all of us are all thinking about on a daily basis!! i need you to keep writing!! awesome!!

if you can, can you try to write a comment on my poems? i luv critism cuz u never grow if you never get feedback!!!

on Jun. 8 2009 at 6:48 pm
xXkittygrrxX BRONZE, Wellington, Florida
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WOW thats is so true yeah u really summed it up

on Apr. 10 2009 at 1:30 am
horseluva BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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AMAZING!!!!!THAT SUMS IT UP!!!

CSJ said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 3:56 pm
I agree

on Feb. 28 2009 at 1:55 pm
Know-Nothing BRONZE, Stow, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Meow. Frow.

Absolutely true.

on Feb. 17 2009 at 2:51 am
SaveThEmpty SILVER, Rathbun, Iowa
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this is a perfect description of the world today..and i love it!