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The Best of a Soul

January 1, 2012
By kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

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Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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When you are with the world, like it with passion,
For, your sight is wide open!
There’s nothing to feel odd about opening your heart,
For, a pure heart enjoys it that way!
Try to enjoy which is good, but you dislike,
For, then you will feel a change!
Don’t be back with what you ought to know,
For, something will be disturbing if you are!
Make fear reduce from you,
For it is what stops you from trying!
Trying hard will bring success,
For, experiences are what it has got!
Always be a faithful and a good man,
For, that is the best a soul can be!
Best of a soul is how positive he is, with himself,
And how grateful he is to the world!

© Becky F., Sacramento, CA

The author's comments:
When one is grateful, he is blessed,
When one is positive, he is thoughtful and patient!
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This article has 13 comments.

RCB31 said...
on May. 6 2012 at 2:24 am
RCB31, Kanyakumari, Other
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&quot;Whatever happens life has to go on&quot;

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Very Nice...Keep it uP...
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 10:01 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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Thanks, dude! :)
Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 8:56 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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love it!!!!!
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 10:31 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Gracious. Yah I will, so will u? And feel free to leave a comment!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 8:50 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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This is beautiful. Awww. You write like an adult from medeival times. It's very distinctive in a great way. I'd be honored if you checked out my other stuff. :D
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 3:41 am
Wow. I love this poem:). It's beautiful written. Good job!
Tonite BRONZE said...
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this is beautiful!!!!!!!
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:35 am
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very well, thank u!
Fairy_Me said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 1:54 am
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Wow!! I love this poem!! It makes me read again and again...
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 12:31 pm
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I'll give a bow to your comment.. :) Thank you!
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 12:29 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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thanx man.. i really felt right it this way!
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:50 am
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this poem was beautiful keep it up man
IzzyVT SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 2:57 pm
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I love your use of exclamation points...what a joyful poem! And the art you've chosen is a nice fit.