Unspoken | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Unspoken

Unspoken

December 28, 2011
By marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
More by this author
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

View profile

The words rose to the
Tip of my tongue
Piling and
piling
up
Into a big, towering jumble
Of letters.
I opened my mouth, pursed my
Lips, and the words slid
Forward--
only to be pushed right back--
The jumble of them--quite
A mile long--they all went
Unspoken as I
swallowed them
Back down into the
Depths and recesses of me where
All those words--a huge
Pile--remain forever--
Quiet--I-could've-but-I
Didn't--
Unspoken.

© Samantha A., Southbury, CT

The author's comments:
This is my monologue.
Just listen.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Death After Life
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Never The Same
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
My Sister's Keeper
By Angels1031 BRONZE
Fort Worth, Texas
Angels1031 BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments
View profile
Poetry
Do It Now!
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
The Voice
By BreLee SILVER
Sula, Montana
BreLee SILVER, Sula, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Secret Crush
By C.J.H. BRONZE
Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
C.J.H. BRONZE, Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes the world tries ot knock it out of you. But I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales." August Rush(2007)

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 13 comments.

marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 6:02 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

View profile
thank you thank you! =)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 6:02 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

View profile
thank you so much!! =)
Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 8:29 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

View profile
I love this poem its written so well and very easy to relate to. Your a great writer and I really enjoy reading your work. This definitely deserves 5/5 :)
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 6:36 pm
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.

View profile
This Poem , Is Amazing , I love how you write and express your feelings. I can relate to this oh so much . I Love this poem , Continue Writing(:
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 9:38 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

View profile
I just read this comment now, and you did?? Cool! I saw part of the movie in school, because one day I had to miss class for orchestra lessons. I should have known you already read it XD.
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 15 2012 at 4:56 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

View profile
I'm glad someone else can relate, thats also what i shoot for when i write, and yeah, this poem means a lot to me. Thanks for commenting, and ps. Speak Now =)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 15 2012 at 4:53 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

View profile
thank you :)
Estelle_Star SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 1:56 pm
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions,&quot; James A. Michener.

View profile
How you write this shows that you are really connected to this and it means something to you. I can relate to this poem a lot. So many things I should have said, but I didn't. I really love it. Keep writing!
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 9:05 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

View profile
I like the style this poems written in and it definitly describes wanting to say somethiing but not being able to pretty well, good job =)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 3:12 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

View profile
thanks! :D
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 3:10 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

View profile
Guess what? I already did :P I love that book, i stayed up till 2am one time watching the movie. XD it was really inspiring. Lol okay okay sis i will keep writing! ;D
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 7:10 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

View profile
Wow, I really like the meter on this poem, it emphasizes the message so much. It's halting and hesitating just like the words. :)
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 4:07 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

View profile
Sis, you should read the book Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson, if you haven't already. It is a really inspiring book, and a pretty easy read. It truly relates to this wonderfully written poem. Please sis KEEP WRITING AND NEVER STOP.