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January 16, 2012
By Anonymous

It happened
but never did
you knew
but never mentioned
the opposite
was but told
we thought
that everything
for possible
to be the truth
but the truth
is that you
Lied !

The author's comments:
The way lies appear to be the truth "It happened but never did"
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denifelice SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:53 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
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First, I like that it's short and gets the message to the reader without having to be all cliche and stuff. Second, I love how you put a degree of mystery in this piece, it's very interesting. Also, I like how vague it is so that anyone can relate. Good work!
Simplyjessey BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 9:48 am
Simplyjessey BRONZE, Dillonvale, Ohio
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nice work :)
Acastillo GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:10 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Very nice! I liked that it was short, but it told a lot. Great job!
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:31 am
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haha this is pretty dope
butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 5:53 am
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hey! this is very good and very relatable. keep it up!
-Char- GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 1:08 am
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Very good :)
mariissa said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 11:16 am
mariissa, Sdfsa, Nebraska
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Well said.. I really do get where your coming from :/
.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:43 am
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Yes, this is an very old poem, but thanks for the honest review !
xJessex666 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:02 am
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This poem is a bit simple You could've ended it better than Lies!
Kimberlywrites BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 1:50 pm
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It's a really unique poem. Very interesting way of describing a lie.
jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 9:13 am
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too much feelings, i think they are a bit messy and not understood well in your mind. i like it , it seems honest
GHALC BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:24 am
GHALC BRONZE, Adasdasd, Kansas
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Seems like theres real emotion in it, I like it. I also like how short it is, and you still got the message across. :)
.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:16 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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No, it's just anything i wrote down.
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:08 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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it's quite nice ... reallly liked it .
AutumnInside BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:14 am
AutumnInside BRONZE, Newfane, New York
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I feel like this is really heart felt with a story behind it. It's very good. I like it's length.
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:13 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Well spoke, but honestly not to be crass or anything is this about a physical thing that happened?
iamawesomeK SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 6:11 am
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i think it's a nice short poem
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 5:18 am
This is a nice poem:). i like the message of the poem.