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The Torture

January 24, 2012
By Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote


I just can't take this stuff.I'm going to blow you away.I'm going to be a monster on these streets,so stay away.Yes I am a crazy monster.Red is what I see.When i get into my beast zone,You aren't who i would want to be.Mess with me and I will put you out of sight.If you really think that's a threat then keep messing with me and I just might!


The author's comments:
There was a point in time where I was constantly harassed and taken as a joke.After that this written piece came to life.

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on Feb. 13 2012 at 2:53 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

i feel the same way.i get my best pieces when i am either hurt,sad,or angry

on Feb. 10 2012 at 8:31 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

You know I will agree with you Frenchie15 it does look like its one of your best pieces:) And your welcome. All of your other writings are really good too though..I get to thinkin it seems like when someone is angry; even me; people tend to write better..its a little weird to me..

on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:41 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

thank you.i wrote this one day when i was really angry.i actually think it is one of my best though

on Feb. 9 2012 at 8:12 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I love this! And it rhymes really good. Great Job!:)