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no man's land

January 21, 2012
By mayra16 BRONZE, Secunderabad, Other
mayra16 BRONZE, Secunderabad, Other
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I’m almost there i know
Just not yet
On the brink of new love
On the edge of old hate.

Stuck somewhere here
In no man’s land
Just need a little time
or a helping hand.

There’s sand
there’s snow
Its dark here
Not even a faint glow

Its a moonless sky
There’s a mist in the night
As dark as ever
But still revealing a chink
In my might.

Feeling caged
A little scared i agree
Counting each breadth
Waiting to be free

Each minute seems like forever
Each hour not enough time
Each breadth seems to pierce like a dagger
Each step a thousand miles.



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winterwhite said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 10:23 am
amazing...keep goin

summersally said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 8:01 am
nice wrk.,.,gr8 goin

on Feb. 23 2012 at 12:43 am

wow...

love it


hellscat said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 8:20 am
great,love d start:)

coolguy said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 8:19 am
gr8 goin...keep it up.

pcmiley said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 8:17 am
great work!

hotstuff said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 7:00 am
brilliant..this should b in print..with me nybody?

scarydo said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 6:54 am
nice work..keep it up

soccerman said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 12:03 am
great work

on Feb. 21 2012 at 12:01 am
dark,edgy..truly amazing keep it up

pippa m said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 12:00 am
love the start..great flow

dark angel said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 11:59 pm
superb! one of my new favourites

on Feb. 20 2012 at 11:52 pm
you're really good...dnt stop rhyming

on Feb. 20 2012 at 11:47 pm
great work..keep writin

emily!! said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 9:46 am
deep...bloody deep keep it up!

sunshine:) said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 9:41 am
AMAZING! love the start