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R.M.S.Titanic

February 26, 2012
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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R.M.S.Titanic...
They called it the Ship of Dreams,
it sailed along like a tranquil reverie.
Some said it'll reach the States, some questioned it's destiny.
The dreaded night arrived at last. A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it from the inside out, destroyed every single thing, sparing just a handful.
The mighty ship cleaved into half, plunging everything into the cold darkness of the infinite waters, plunging dreams, hopes, lives and love.
Titanic, a prisoner of fate, now lies underneath the Great Ocean, tranquil as when it first set sail, immortalizing a beautiful dream turned into a terrible nightmare...

© Hannah B., Princeton, IL

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PiDaBest said...
on Mar. 23 2015 at 9:01 am
This is very meaningful.
necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 9:55 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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wow very good
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 10:11 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you, anonymous :)
AnonymousLoveLetter BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:11 am
AnonymousLoveLetter BRONZE, Chicago Hights, Illinois
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This one is really good too. You use your words really well when it comes to setting scenes.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2012 at 10:23 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thanks so much for the comment :D even I'm fond of that line :) I'm such a titanic fanatic !! though it was a very tragic incident, it really captures my attention and I'm very much drawn to anything that has to do with the ship. and the movie... just too good!
Eliquencity PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 1:11 pm
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Favorite line: "A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it..." Displaying the iceberg as a demon's hand, crushing the ship? Great writing, augustsummerfling!

If this interests you, I was in my school's Titanic: The Musical production. I cried during the show. :)  There was a song that went, "Ship of Dreams!", so I could relate that to your poem.

Powerful verbs; powerful writing; descriptive. It's no head-scratcher why you recieved sixty comments.

AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:50 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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thank you ;)
KateLovesMusicAndArt BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:46 pm
KateLovesMusicAndArt BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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This is great! :)  KEEP WRITING
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:39 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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understood ;)
hypermagical said...
on Jun. 3 2012 at 9:25 am
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oy, sorry 'bout that! i meant that it didn't actually have sails. of coure it was a sailing ship!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2012 at 8:59 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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was not a sailing ship? I dont really get you... anyway glad you liked it :)
hypermagical said...
on Jun. 2 2012 at 5:36 am
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I like this poem for it's imagery, but I'd like to point out that RMS Titanic was not a sailing ship.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 25 2012 at 11:06 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thank you :) :)
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on Apr. 22 2012 at 9:34 am
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This is a great poem, very well written!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 4:22 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
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on Apr. 16 2012 at 12:26 pm
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This is really good! Amazing choice of words. I really like it! :) Great job!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 10:03 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Glad you liked it :)
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on Apr. 13 2012 at 7:42 am
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I really liked this poem, though I've never reallyy been much of a titanic fan. Still I liked the imagry and passion.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:54 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thank you!
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This was beautifully constructed !