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A Poem For Nate

March 18, 2012
By BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy.&quot;<br /> -George Jean Nathan

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A pool of blue crystal, an ocean typhoon
A smile that can break through steel
A melodious mixture of love and friendship
A personality that can lighten any mood
Perfection in its rarest form
What more could one ask?
A gentle kiss to destroy to shroud of the monster I used to be
A kiss to strike the heart with pure faultlessness
Like a dream painted into reality
A true love like this shall never be broken
Not even with the sharpest knife

The author's comments:
This was about Nate, a boy I dated. i wrote this to help remind myself of the things I loved about him during the rough parts in our relationship.
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BriRose2014 SILVER said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 6:21 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy.&quot;<br /> -George Jean Nathan

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lol thank you!!!
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 1:00 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Because I can!-Me &quot;Life is a choice and death is a decision&quot;-Lil Wayne

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I really like it. The end kind of contradicts "If I Die Young". lol!
BriRose2014 SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 5:17 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy.&quot;<br /> -George Jean Nathan

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thank you! :D
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 5:03 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Your imagery and language are exquisite!!!!!!! I am impressed, I love this! :D