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Lost With The Sadow of Your Paine

April 12, 2012
By Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
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I don’t know what to say
To make this pain go away
My blood is draining from my face
My heart is losing is steady pace
My eyes role back my body goes numb
My heart is beating like a dyeing drum
Why don’t you leave me?
Why can’t I be free?
You cause all this pain
But what do you gain?
You have all your strength and all your pride
What do you have to hide?

© Yara K., Bethesda, MD

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teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 11:41 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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I like it :)
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 11:41 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The poem seems ambiguous. It can be like a breakup, a death, or other things. 
SweetSandyFlower GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 11:41 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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I love this one! The emotion is really deep and you can feel it in the words. LOVE IT
AllysonMarie said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 7:37 am
It wasnt inproppriet or anything bad. It was my own opinion. (: And what do you mean "we'll" , Its been approved, I didnt say anything bad about the poetry. I thought it was ok.!
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 11:47 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!
AllysonMarie GOLD said...
on Apr. 14 2012 at 5:03 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
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It was good.! But, I couldnt really foloow the message