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Serenity and You

May 12, 2012
By compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

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When you are in the storm of trouble...

Feel your heart
If it feels right,
Take the sword and fight it!
Let the wounds bleed and be revived
However...if it feels otherwise,
Fight it with the sword of serenity,
Soon follows the veracity!

at either times,
you are truly yourself when you are serene,
Do you realize that?
Give it a try, see the CHANGE, the REAL YOU.
Therefore, feel your heart in a state of serenity.
Even so, not in a tempestuous state,
For sure it will bring you down into ashes.

Fine! if you lose yourself to rage,
Baby, there’s always a second chance.
Just realize yourself to yourself.
Don’t repeat the mistake.



Its ok if you fall,
For you will rise!
Just don’t fall in the same line yet again.


Being yourself baby, sometimes requires restitution
do so and make yourself over.
Be yourself baby for you are made awesome!

© Matt S., Glastonbury, CT

The author's comments:
I figured that i think and behave distinctly when i am in a rage and when i am serene, with the results being neat when i am serene.Dont you feel the same?
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This article has 43 comments.

Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2014 at 10:42 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

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NIce poem! I was really into it! It seemed almost like a song! :) U have talent!
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:38 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Really intense. Good job!
Just-Another-Girl GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 1:46 am
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Great poem and really positive actually made me feel good and made me smile so great work keep it up! Best one i have read today :D
Fizza SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2012 at 11:35 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
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Very nice work. Nice poem.:)
taterbug235 SILVER said...
on Jul. 13 2012 at 7:17 am
taterbug235 SILVER, Flora, Indiana
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wow this is soo filled with possitiveness it made me smile. good work :)
nakubara PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 10:50 am
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This screams with emotion! I love it!
memaura said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 2:10 pm
memaura, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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AMAZING!!!!!!
ACreativeMess SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2012 at 2:09 am
ACreativeMess SILVER, Shawnee, Kansas
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This is amazing! I love it!!
earthhashope SILVER said...
on Jun. 19 2012 at 7:52 am
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
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Really good poem!!!!! 
Pika_Princess said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 2:10 am
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I loved your message. It's one that I can defintely relate to. Nice job and nice word choice.
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it doesn't really ryme. but all in all i understand it and its not just random words
JaneDoe_ BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2012 at 12:08 am
JaneDoe_ BRONZE, MossPoint, Mississippi
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I love it! It's positive (:
werty5love SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 11:24 am
werty5love SILVER, Temecula, California
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I very much liked how it's very much a keep calm, you can fall but don't fall for it twice. The pace was good also.
Songs_Along GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 7:30 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
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hmmm.....good work...good amount of tranquility..... :)
TanviKusum DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 5:32 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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This is amazing! very inspiring.
SugarcoatIt BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 6:48 am
SugarcoatIt BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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I love your poem. Its articulate, expressive, raw, and very objective...all in a positive way!! :)

 

EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 5:18 am
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
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Very unique rhythm, rhyme scheme and voice. The theme and subject is strong and portrayed well here. 5/5
xxRozxx said...
on May. 30 2012 at 4:34 am

I liked it a lot....it is something that one can really connect to....It has got a deep meaning to it!

 

ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2012 at 11:05 am
ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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i love how this poem is written from the authors personal feelings. the writing seems...more real

 

Anny_Grace SILVER said...
on May. 28 2012 at 10:46 am
Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
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I love how this poem made me feel! The words really work together to paint more of a feeling than a picture. I also love the aouthors voice that shines throuhg and the line breaks and such. This is deffinetly your style!