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What I Loved About You

July 24, 2012
By crazyartist13 BRONZE, Free Union, Virginia
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I can do anything through He that strengthens me.

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I loved the way your eyes
Were so big and deep
They were like an ocean
Gray like the sea

I loved the way your hands
Were so strong and sure
When intertwined with mine
I was secure

I loved the way your hair
Always in your eyes
Was such a mask for you
Covered your lies

I loved the way you laugh
So goofy and free
Always your face grew red
At least with me

I loved talking to you
About anything
Never was serious
Except to me

I hate the way you left
Only glancing back
Every time you did I swear
You seemed kind of

Sad.

© Denise A., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
You could say it didn't make sense for me to fall so hard for him..I mean, we never dated. He cut me off before he had a chance of falling, chose someone else. But I still cared about him more than any other guy.
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