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July 23, 2012
By werebringingLIFE GOLD, Atlantic City, New Jersey
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" my heart is to small so please, dont break it "

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how you are to me doesnt reflect what you say to me
how you can touch me in all the right places with words but look me in the eyes with love and affection
how you could hug me so low but never say a word
how i remember that 4th on 6th where we would share everlasting embraces
but you contract it with words piercing my heart...
your skin is rough but gentle
every time our hands meet my fingers tingle with

PASSION

the passion you show in your actions
the carefulness with your actions
how you plan ahead of time
if only you see what i see.....

© Gary C., Pequannock, NJ

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love makes people blind..... and i was totally blind when i wrote this...
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