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August 2, 2012
By Countrygirl565 GOLD, Plymouth, Indiana
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Countrygirl565 GOLD, Plymouth, Indiana
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I never knew what love meant, until I met you.

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The world is spinning, all I see is black and white.
Tears are falling!
Words aren't coming!
I'm struggling to survive!
Cold with fear,
filled with doubt,
falling, falling to the ground.
Will I live?
Will I die?
Will I survive?

© Dominique D., Ozone Park, NY

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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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I think it's a bad thing my first thought was Katniss.... Oh well, this is a great poem, and it captures all the emotions in such a short time period. Well done.
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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&quot;Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> &quot;Can&#039;t get no more free randy!&quot;

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What an amazing poem! I love the last few lines, short but powerful.
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> &quot;Can&#039;t get no more free randy!&quot;

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What an amazing poem! I love the last few lines, short but powerful.