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What if the rain is simply teardrops?

August 25, 2012
By LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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What if the rain is simply teardrops
Created by the sadness of the stars?
What if the wind is their sighs
As they look at us from afar?
What if lightening is anger-
The stars lashing out in rage?
Maybe their emotions have poured out for centuries
As they live from age to age.

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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Have you ever wondered what if would be like to be a star? Watching people, always there, looking down at the world? PLease please comment!
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LittleLadybird GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 11:23 am
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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Aww thank you so much!! :)
krittika BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 3:36 am
krittika BRONZE, Calcutta, Other
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It's an amazing poem!  :D And deep as well :P  Few can write this way. :)
LittleLadybird GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 1:43 pm
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it&#039;s hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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Thanx Alex! :D this wasnt the piece I meant to link to u though!! :S haha thanks anyways, means a lot :) x
I-Love-EDM SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 1:40 pm
I-Love-EDM SILVER, Hamilton, New Jersey
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WOOOW IVE NEVER READ SOMETHING THAT DEEP. KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!