the foreplay (conversations) | Teen Ink

the foreplay (conversations) MAG

November 1, 2012
By lreeves GOLD, BALTIMORE, Maryland
lreeves GOLD, BALTIMORE, Maryland
17 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
who i am is not in the definition of ur beliefs<br /> i have every right to keep my head held high and regonize <br /> my beauty both mentally and physically..<br /> you dont define me<br /> you&#039;ve never been webster and you will never be god.<br /> i am a complex being and<br /> my true beauty lies in my state of mind.<br /> physically, i can be all that<br /> but i want ur eyes to see my mind,<br /> your ears to hear my thoughts<br /> and regonize my knowledge<br /> i am poetry...<br /> feel the words that slips off my lips<br /> the emotion that drips off my ink<br /> embrace the aura in every syllable that is written.<br /> Now watch me bring my emotions into your imagination.<br /> it is who i am, i am poetry.


I'm here, lying flat on my back
eyes closed in total serenity of you
listening to the drums of my heart beating against my ribs
building, anticipating to explosive thoughts that surf my head
my mind spins in a daze,
manipulating my visions
giving a vivid image of your presence
as my ears play the clearest octave of your voice
my sanity allows you
to Pierce my soul
violate my mind
and rape my thoughts,
i drip of creativity
receiving a mind blow called conversation
my brain begs for more.
eyes still shut
imagination running undressed
adding and subtracting words
formulating the perfect figures of speech
as you speak to my mind
yes, my thoughts become slutty
freedom to roam naked and wrestle with your words
it's almost illegal
like incest,
but i don't care
as long as those words
escape the prison of your
lips and find rest upon my ears
giving my mind the privilege of unscrambling your thoughts
I'll lay flat on my back, eyes closed
foreplaying a conversation with you
blowing your mind
violating your thoughts
undressing metaphors and similes
that stay locked behind those lips.


The author's comments:
A good conversation blows the mind and leave you in a daze.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


lreeves GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 9:52 am
lreeves GOLD, BALTIMORE, Maryland
17 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
who i am is not in the definition of ur beliefs<br /> i have every right to keep my head held high and regonize <br /> my beauty both mentally and physically..<br /> you dont define me<br /> you&#039;ve never been webster and you will never be god.<br /> i am a complex being and<br /> my true beauty lies in my state of mind.<br /> physically, i can be all that<br /> but i want ur eyes to see my mind,<br /> your ears to hear my thoughts<br /> and regonize my knowledge<br /> i am poetry...<br /> feel the words that slips off my lips<br /> the emotion that drips off my ink<br /> embrace the aura in every syllable that is written.<br /> Now watch me bring my emotions into your imagination.<br /> it is who i am, i am poetry.

thank you so much and i will be checking out your work C:

on Nov. 6 2012 at 4:41 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

This is an ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC PIECE! It really is well written, attention grabbing, and powerfully put with a great use of an extended vocabulay that you use to your advantage when writing! PLEASE read some of my pieces too!