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Can't Live

November 30, 2012
By PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin


Take

away the pain that I feel in my soul.

Drown


me with happiness and joy.
Make

my life completely, and fully whole.

I can't live like this anymore.



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on Jan. 20 2013 at 11:28 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin

Yeah it was, Thank you!

on Jan. 20 2013 at 11:27 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin

Thanks for the Advice. :)

on Dec. 26 2012 at 6:31 pm
jdaniels1779 BRONZE, New York, New York
3 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.<br /> Maya Angelou

Hi got99 I can tell this was an emotional poem. I can really sense that in your word choice. It was deep dude :)

on Dec. 9 2012 at 12:36 am
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 342 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist.&quot;<br /> - Oscar Wilde

That was short but sweet, and very imforming. Maybe you could try using stronger adjectives.