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Forever is a lie

December 5, 2012
By invisible.ink.pen PLATINUM, Pacific, Missouri
invisible.ink.pen PLATINUM, Pacific, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We choose our joys and sorrows long before we experience them,&quot;<br /> -Kahlil Gibran


We could've made it last
But you wouldn't forget my past
You promised me something you couldn't keep
Now here and alone I weep
But I'll dry my own tears
And grow stronger beyond my years
And forget the boy I thought I knew.
Forever is a lie
I just wanted someone who would be mine
Now your gone
And I wonder where I went wrong
But you're the one to blame
So point away your finger of shame
Forever is a lie
What have I learned except of to be careful not to trust just any guy
-<3-



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on Dec. 12 2012 at 11:18 am
invisible.ink.pen PLATINUM, Pacific, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We choose our joys and sorrows long before we experience them,&quot;<br /> -Kahlil Gibran

Thanks everyone (: I actually wrote this spontaneously. I do have a guy but it's kind of complicated... It really brought a smile to my face to know so many have seen/commented/rated and connected with my writing. <3 Thank-you!!! If anyone has any theme ideas I'm having writers' block lately

on Dec. 12 2012 at 11:14 am
invisible.ink.pen PLATINUM, Pacific, Missouri
30 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We choose our joys and sorrows long before we experience them,&quot;<br /> -Kahlil Gibran

Thanks it's easier than you would think too. I just write what my heart tells me to and somehow it turns into beautiful poetry that anyone can relate to.

namiko BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2012 at 6:26 pm
namiko BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
you do not work a day of your life when your doing what you love.

I really do enjoy how you don't need to use the whole page to describe your feelings towards the person, and or situation. 

on Dec. 11 2012 at 6:15 pm
Found.Gone.Captured SILVER, MiddleOfNowhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I never do anything, unless I know the price I am going to pay.&quot;

I felt the same way. And also wrote stories about it. I understand how you feel and can really relate to this poem. You did a wonderful job.

Eliss BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2012 at 4:24 pm
Eliss BRONZE, Los Alamos, New Mexico
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I feel ya definitely. Just gotta keep your head up girl!(: This shit is so amazing and legit(:

on Dec. 11 2012 at 12:42 pm
MySweetJuliette BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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Don't worry (: you will meet someone that will really show you that forever does exist ^-^

on Dec. 11 2012 at 10:56 am
ClosetPoet166 SILVER, Mt.Sterling, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimese it&#039;s not your work that is too intellectually worded. Some people are just to illiterate to understand&quot; ~Me

I see where your coming from because i felt like that for so long, but you always have to look for the light in the dark and find hope when you think theirs none. I did and i found someone and we're getting married. See even when you think there is no hope there is always a little if you look for it and keep your head held high. Good luck.

on Dec. 11 2012 at 10:20 am
FearlessAngel GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Pain is just a simple compromise, so we can get what we want out of it.&quot;<br /> ~Paramore

Aw don't mistrust every guy just because of one numbskull. I really like this poem though. So many people can relate.