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Abandoned

January 23, 2013
By JNG612 SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
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You left me.

No matter how many times
I say that I need you,
You still left me.

So here I lie,
Curled up in a
Ball on my bed.

Grasping for comfort
When there is
None
To be
Found.

You claim to be my
Friend, yet you refuse
To give me what I need.

Isolated and
Alone. What reason do I have
To not give up?

When did we become
The people that we only
Turn to in times of trouble?

© Jennifer H., Bethesda, MD

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Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Feb. 1 2013 at 5:18 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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I loved this too, and I can really relate.
colorguardgrl ELITE said...
on Feb. 1 2013 at 11:05 am
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i like the last stanza it really makes the poem great job :D