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Her Life

March 5, 2013
By JesikahW78 GOLD, Ogden, Utah
JesikahW78 GOLD, Ogden, Utah
18 articles 7 photos 19 comments

There she standing alone
with a broken life….
Guys go by only to lie…. to her.
Every night she cries into her pillow

Wishing she could go back.
Now she has to live a life
She never wanted to.


If only she knew she was more
That her life isn’t just it
If only…she could see
she still could change it all
that someone out there will love herdespite her flaws and
pass mistakes

Every day she's looking
every day she hoping
Evey day she wishing
That life would just take
a new turn


If only she knew she was more
That her life isn’t just it


If only…she could see
she still could change it all
that someone out there will love herdespite her flaws and pass mistakes

If only
she new.....


The author's comments:
I wrote this because i have a friend that is just messing up her life. And its breaking my heart.

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on Jun. 4 2013 at 9:48 pm
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.&rdquo;<br /> -Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> &quot;I&#039;m just a little bit caught in the middle,<br /> Life is a maze, and love is a ridde.&quot;<br /> -Lenka

This is beautiful, JRB. It's so sad, and I'm sorry that your friend is going through tough times, that must be hard on you too. This poem is wonderful, though, and the only thing I'd change is it has a few spelling errors. (i.e. "she new" should be "she knew", etc.) Keep it up, this was such a good read! :)  

on Jun. 4 2013 at 9:46 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

Despite there being quite a few grammatical errors, it was still really good, and so sweet!