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why i love you

March 28, 2013
By Creatures_of_the_Night BRONZE, Harrison, Georgia
Creatures_of_the_Night BRONZE, Harrison, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
my feelings are mine and if you dont like it then leave.


You give to me hope
And help me to cope
When life pulls me down
You bring me around

You teach me to care
And help me to share
You make me honest
With kindness the best

From you I learned love
With grace from above
It's for you I live
And I want to give

You are the reason
That fills each season
When I hear love I think of you
You are my world and best friend too

I love you because you are so kind, thoughtful and caring
I love you because you are so pleasant, lovely and sharing

You made me the man I am
Thank you


The author's comments:
love is my weakness

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on Jul. 4 2013 at 8:45 pm
Creatures_of_the_Night BRONZE, Harrison, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
my feelings are mine and if you dont like it then leave.

thanks for the comment but that is not i was going for but thanks anyway...

on Jul. 4 2013 at 8:33 pm
Tabitha1233 PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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I would rather live my life as if there is a God and die to find out there isn't, than live my life as if there isn't and die to find out there is. Albert Camus

I thought this poem was very fun and simple! I really liked the feel and the emotion that you put into it! Great Job!

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on Apr. 9 2013 at 8:17 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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I like the theme of the poem, but I think the rhyming is a little childish and overly simplistic. Maybe that's what you were aiming for though. Otherwise good job :)