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His Hands

April 4, 2013
By Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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His smooth hands
Find their way to hers.
Holding,
Calming,
Easing.
Gentle yet rough,
Soothing yet strong.
They waited in the shadows,
Until she provided light.

She says he can
Transform the world
With just one flick
Of his wrist.
With those loving hands,
He held her heart
And laced it
With his.

© Alexa T., Pompton Plains, NJ

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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 10 2013 at 12:16 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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Thanks u soooooooooo much! :) U r too
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 10 2013 at 12:16 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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Thanks so much! :)
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 12:08 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

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Kyuuuutteeee
Alex_Writer GOLD said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 8:57 am
Alex_Writer GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
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&quot;In the long run, we shape our lives, and we shape ourselves. The process never ends until we die. And the choices we make are ultimately our own responsibility.&quot; ~Eleanor Roosevelt

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WOW.  When I read your poems I wonder how you can do it, how you can pick out the right words and make it flow perfectly.  Keep up the good work!
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:47 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

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I agree i can feel the emotions and its amazing like always you are gonna go far i can see that clearly
mistaken_laughter PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:41 pm
mistaken_laughter PLATINUM, Alvin, Texas
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&quot;There are three rules to writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.&quot; W. Somerset Maugham

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It manages to tell a story in just a few lines. Awesome! :)
7_Ambitions GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:13 pm
7_Ambitions GOLD, Bronx, New York
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Amazing poem , i love the flow , and structure
ZaZaGoober BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2013 at 4:18 pm
ZaZaGoober BRONZE, Hayward, California
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I think this poem is beautifully written and I wish it were longer. Keepp up the great work!