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Let it Rain

April 6, 2013
By Kamana BRONZE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
Kamana BRONZE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone deserves to be loved, even if they can't find it in them to love themselves or anyone else for that matter.


The trees shiver
And the words stumble.
He blows a quiver,
Which makes me rumble.
My belly’s in heavy heaves,
But that’s what Rain does to you.
Bright lights flashing,
Rash decisions made,
Hands, trees, clashing,
But please don’t be afraid.
How can I get the Rain to like me?
How can I calm my storm?
Why can’t the Rain see,
That I’m his sunshine?
I’m right in the mist of the storm,
He’s swirling through my head.
Dancing, hugging, hands in hold,
Singing, growing old.
I’d know his scent a hurricane away,
And I’d follow it where the sun don’t shine.
I can’t help but feel the Rain all around,
And I know it hears my every sound.
It truly is beautiful,
But neither will ever know . . .
We breathe the other’s breath
And step directly in each other’s shoes,
Even so our lives will never fuse.


The author's comments:
This guy and I had really strong feelings for each other but we were in that weird stage where you're both to scared to say anything about it, so the best way for me to describe all of these emotions was to compare it to a big thunderstorm.

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sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2013 at 10:38 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

this was beautiful and moving! i love the comparison, it really painted a picture of what it was like for you.