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Breathing Love

April 16, 2013
By MadelaineIrene SILVER, Euless, Texas
MadelaineIrene SILVER, Euless, Texas
7 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is good to have an end to journey towards; but it is the journey that matters in the end.&quot;<br /> <br /> -Ursula K. Leguin


A heart to heart discussion
?A melting of the soul ?
They felt the rips and tugs ?
Changing up the whole ?
Picture of division
?Never to be seen ?
Was this distant feeling
?Like two hills in a ravine. ??

From a glint in his eyes ?
To a whisper in her heart ?
They fell deep in love ?
A form of art ?
Was now beginning to sculpt ?
A lovely twisted form
?Like tree boughs intertwined ?
Their hearts undefined. ???

A love like this was madness
?It drove them crazy, too! ?
But in the inner hearts ?
They felt their parts were due
?To fall and rise together ?
Like the breathing of the Sun ?
And in their hearts they felt it ?
“I love you, my passionate one!” ??

“So breathe me in, my dearest
?Like the plants breathe the sun. ?
Breathe me in, my dearest ?
As if I am undone! ?
Breathe me in, my sweetheart ?
Like my heart desires you. ?
Breathe me in, my darling
?Because our love is true.”



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on Apr. 17 2013 at 7:21 pm
MadelaineIrene SILVER, Euless, Texas
7 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is good to have an end to journey towards; but it is the journey that matters in the end.&quot;<br /> <br /> -Ursula K. Leguin

I'm sorry about all the question marks!  I don't know why they are there!  I've reuploaded this twice and they still show up!  If you can, please ignore them and just enjoy the poem for what it is!