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A Cracked Window

June 24, 2013
By sparrow-at-flight BRONZE, Mill Valley, California
sparrow-at-flight BRONZE, Mill Valley, California
2 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is mind-traveling, destination unknown."


The world is a cracked window
Time is lost and nothing remains
The view is broken
And so is the past



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on Jul. 10 2014 at 8:32 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

Short or not, It doesn't matter cuz a poem has a msg to share and i believe this poem has left an impact on everyone who read it so mission accompliched ;) Great Job 5/5 :D

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on Jul. 9 2014 at 12:50 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing is impossible; the word itself says &#039;I&#039;m possible&#039;!&quot; -Audrey Hepburn

Short but effective. It left an impact. Good job!

on Jul. 13 2013 at 2:12 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.<br /> Then bicycles were chainless,<br /> Carriages were horseless,<br /> And many laws enforceless.<br /> <br /> Next cookery was fireless,<br /> Telegraphy was wireless,<br /> Cigars were nicotineless,<br /> And coffee caffeineless.<br /> <br /> Soon oranges were seedless,<br /> The putting green was weedless,<br /> The college boy was hatless,<br /> The proper diet fatless.<br /> <br /> New motor roads are dustless,<br /> The latest steel is rustless,<br /> Our tennis courts are sodless,<br /> Our new religion &mdash; godless.

i agree with Jade. great job!

on Jul. 4 2013 at 12:45 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

This is awesome :) short but deep. 5/5