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Aching

June 28, 2013
By StarGirl4101 BRONZE, N/a, Wisconsin
StarGirl4101 BRONZE, N/a, Wisconsin
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Aching, i never knew i could hurt so much

The girl reassures me everything will change soon

Still, i can't forget him and how wrong he was

i fell, fell too hard for things to turn out good

I was too young see, too naive for him

he knew everything he was doing to make me fall

he knew that i would fall like i did for him

but i didn't stop him, i was too hypnotized

yet as much as i hate him with my mind

my heart will always beat when i hear his name

his glorious name which i will always love too much


The author's comments:
this piece is about someone who i fell in love with but he was wrong for me. still i will always love him and i can't stand that

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on Jul. 9 2013 at 11:35 pm
StarGirl4101 BRONZE, N/a, Wisconsin
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thanks for your comment. it means alot because it is my first work ive posted

KylaaM SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2013 at 2:25 pm
KylaaM SILVER, PEI, Other
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this is really good!!!