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Look Up

July 10, 2013
By ClaireWritesStuff BRONZE, Sydney, Other
ClaireWritesStuff BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations." - John Green.


Look up.
Isn’t it beautiful?
Mysterious?
Lonely…
It’s nothing and everything at the same time
A big black dome of emptiness scattered with dust
As well as all of time and space

Close your eyes...
Now open them

Point to the first star you see
That’s where we’ll fly to
We’ll go there together
That blemish on the dark veil of nothing and everything
And we’ll go there
One day.



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Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2013 at 6:09 pm
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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I like how you wrote "that blemish on the dark veil of nothing and everything" because it is really discripive and helps the reader picture the stars in the dark, night sky. I found this poem to be a very hopeful one, since it talked about dreams and goals. Great job!

on Jul. 12 2013 at 12:47 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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Beautifully simplistic and I love your comparison of stars to dust. Good job!