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Ephemeral

September 2, 2013
By werty5love SILVER, Temecula, California
werty5love SILVER, Temecula, California
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Everyone goes by,
running, rushing, ignoring.
And then you were there,
stopping, turning, noticing.

You became my light,
my Savior, my Hero, my love.
You became my companion,
My teacher, my Beacon, my Shield.

Will you stay with me,
laughing, caring, loving.
Or will you go away,
Running, Rushing, Ignoring?



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on Jul. 12 2014 at 2:13 am
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality<br /> -Tim Burton<br /> <br /> and then there&#039;s this one<br /> ╭&cap;╮(︶︿︶)╭&cap;╮

I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the original writing style and beat. Not only were the words meaningful but this poem also glides smootly through your mind. Great job.

on Sep. 17 2013 at 8:54 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

I like it! Very simplistic, as said before, but there was a deeper connection, and I liked it. Good job. 5/5

on Sep. 17 2013 at 8:27 pm
rokkotothezee GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
I never sleep, &#039;cause sleep is the cousin of death

Great job! Very simplistic, but very meaningful as well :)