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Not A Lullaby

September 25, 2013
By BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....


Close your eyes my Little Angel
Close your eyes and Dream
Dream of all those fluffy furry monsters
That widen your beautiful smile

Close your eyes my Sweet Angel
Close your eyes and Dream
Dream of all those Brighter Colours
That fill your heart with Joy

Close your eyes my Love
Close your eyes and Dream
Dream and forget all your pains
And if you see a bright light
Don't be afriad to go in.


The author's comments:
Dying in Peace is better than Living in Pain.

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on Oct. 3 2013 at 2:30 pm
AnInkling SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
6 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;This is your life. Is it everything you dreamed that it would be, when the world was younger and you had everything to lose?&rdquo; Switchfoot<br /> &ldquo;Have I now become your enemy by telling you the truth?&rdquo; Galatians 4:16

I liked your poem very much, but at the begining the phrase "fluffy furry monsters" really took away from the poem. The word "monsters" implies something bad, and "fluffy furry" seems almost silly. But I really liked the ending! Good job!